A Song Poem by Chulsoo Kim

A Song

Rating: 5.0


To aim where to go and
find out why to go
are your song to dedicate to Him
Bring sorrow from the air into your mind
as seeing the toughness from the flower and grass
which go through summer's sun and rain from the sky
Sorrow makes the fear kneel down
with the the power of sky and air
for going forward to Him
Hand out your hand to a song sounding from inside
Step on earth with pleasure and take power from deep there
Dedicate your song through yourself

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 02 August 2010

Mellifluent Metaphor…. ‘Step on earth with pleasure and take power from deep there Dedicate’ ~ the finish is vigorous yet lithe fluffy and benevolent…indeed a great poem… thanks sharing… Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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