A Ripe Persimmon Poem by Chulsoo Kim

A Ripe Persimmon

Rating: 5.0


What have you done until you come to me? Ripe persimmon!
To become pink-colour flesh inside thinned skin,
to leave taut fattening to my lip
you make spring and summer be stretched
with lifting heat- piling-up-plate to heaven
with connecting bronze colour vein to earth
you, an arrow target, look after parting of wind
you already rise to dress up to the autumn
Didn't you raise your sweet voice because of severance from the world
on the day of separating stalk?
Don't you hurt when firm flesh become soft to be runny?
Don't you fidget to find out to whom you get married?
Do you feel relieved at the time of catching sight of me?
When cherished flesh is bared with the skin undressed,
when you feel your flesh exposed to air for the first time
do you cover up with shyness
the chest shivering because you can't find where to go?
Do you perspire the groan of pleasure
when lips are matched
when sitting on the tongue?
Are you fearing to break up
when I taste even though the flesh is dispersing?
I am happy with you gotten.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 27 July 2010

Like diplomatic immunity cross country visa…poetic pass port have entry into your bosom and readers too … ‘Don't you fidget to find out to whom you get married? ’ ~ Known but just romancing...a type of sweet courtship [lolol] …excellently worded… thanks for sharing … Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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you make spring and summer be stretched with lifting heat- piling-up-plate to heaven an interesting contrast of line and taste throughout the poem :)

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Joseph Poewhit 11 July 2010

Puts forth a point of view well

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