A Single Wish Poem by lady grace

A Single Wish

Rating: 4.4


if I have one single wish
i’ll go back to the moment we kissed
where in your arms, I laid and rest
thousand times you made your promises...

if I have one single wish
i’ll go back to the moment
when you first visit our dwelling
and ask my hand from them...

if I have one single wish
i’ll go back to the days
when I cried over your naughty words
and sealed my lips with kisses...

if only i could have one wish
i'll ask for one of these three wishes
it wasn't me who let you go
hope these wishes are your wishes too..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 22 August 2009

yup.....its two to tango.... but u just accomplished a crane dance complete with beak rubbing and wing flapping...in words and lines... beautiful....loved reading it.... i am sending it to some friends ttoo.. cheers and ten naiz...welldone

0 0 Reply
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 August 2009

if I have one single wish i’ll go back to the moment we kissed where in your arms, I laid and rest thousand times you made your promises....single wish to make your dreams fulfilled with strong desire and as tribute.....10 I shall continue to thrive Your spirit will live and may be revived I shall make it livelier than life Prove to be honest and dedicated wife .........read mine 'anniversary'

0 0 Reply
Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 24 August 2009

passion well articulated. shan

0 0 Reply
Deborah Cromer 25 August 2009

Dear wishes all written out from the heart. Deep and meaningful this is a very touching poem. There is sadness that escapes from your soul and talks to the reader. There is reason for all. We all wish to go back to make things different sometimes...but it is not to be. Accepting life as it plays out is so very difficult at times, we need to have strength. Find happiness and share. Thanks for sharing your poetry with me. DC

0 0 Reply
Ying Escalona 25 August 2009

ug nag basa ang iyang mga ngabil sa katam-is pasiriti ko ding

0 0 Reply
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 19 June 2010

Healthy high calorie romantic wish…keep no doubt …sure to come true...he’ll be yours and solely yours..I too wish lady the same Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10+

0 0 Reply
Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 31 December 2009

Hats off to your words, imagination and to the kind of heart you have :)

0 0 Reply
Saadat Tahir 04 September 2009

lady...wonderful poem... touches deep down and works on you superb presentation well done cheers and ten

0 0 Reply
Noel Horlanda 04 September 2009

How romantic, I remember myself using these lovable lines to one of my girlfriends when I was still a naughty teener. I wish I could go back to that exciting period of time. Hi-school days, yah know? That could be my single wish then...

0 0 Reply
Courtney Loren 02 September 2009

i loved the meaning of this poem.. it was nice.. keep writting dear... cheers!

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success