A Simple Plea Poem by lady grace

A Simple Plea

Rating: 4.3


my shield can't resist the coming storm
tears will fall down anytime
oh dear...dont close your eyes
don't leave me alone in the night...

keep me under your wings
as you always do to me
build a roof to protect me
i am hopeless..hopeless as can be...

i am more than a great
if you are here by my side
i am more than excellent
if i saw you in my eyes...

you are my one more chance
my last chance to live
please don't ever ever go away
keep me under your wings
please..... stay with me...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ejaz Khan 26 June 2009

Sometimes love is just a one way traffic and it doesn't bite on pity, be strong and show self esteem, if it's real it'll stay.

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rago rago 26 June 2009

a concern and self esteem.......... let the simple plea come true....... see my 10 ++

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Efe Benjamin 26 June 2009

a simple and lovely plea for love, affection, trust, etcetera. very interesting.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 June 2009

'i am more than a great if you are here by my side i am more than excellent if i saw you in my eyes...' Lovely love poem. Lovely idea.10+++

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Kristina B; Williams 05 July 2009

a simple plea, for a 10, lol

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Ramin Chaman 13 October 2009

We Iranian's have a proverb 'that is to say.....'{keep me under your wings.} just whatever you say'...and yes it's yummy for me..about your poem...Lady that is very nice..and readable...10=

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Antonio Liao 11 October 2009

what a great trust....an infinitum of giving to the one LOVE.... my vow of respect to the poet....the romance that lay down of everything just to be one of the beloved....wish to reach that trust to the immortality of my soul to the heart that leads the way to its destiny...a 10 +++++

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Gold Fish 07 October 2009

brilliant! accepting vulnerability to plead to be placed under the shelter of his wings Lovely. The emotions are remarkably vivid like a two-edge sword that cuts straight to the heart. Keep up the good work.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2009

please don't ever ever go away keep me under your wings please..... stay with me.........and donot go away...it is so touchy feeling and this is staage where everybody go mad......10 read mine what abt tomorrow...cry not

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Christopher Flynn 10 July 2009

Loves embrace To show how great Together two can be And how venerable loneliness can be Nice poem Lady Grace

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