Donal Mahoney


A Senior Citizen's First Email - Poem by Donal Mahoney

Things are quiet here, a friend writes
in the first email of his long life:

Most mornings I drive to Gillson Park,
sit and read beside the Lake.
The waves are a symphony.
Books are better there. Sometimes
a redwing blackbird will attack,
protecting its nest. The weather's
cool and there's rain at night.
It's not summer in Chicago
as you and I remember it.

I have a cell phone now too
and I use it all the time.
The landline's just a holdover
from the good old days.

Speaking of holdovers,
we should get together
while we still can.
At our age, who knows
how long either of us has.
People our age drop dead
without too much ado.

Tell you what: Whoever gets sick first
will notify the other one who'll take
a plane and race death to see
who arrives at the bedside first.
If I'm talking to a priest, wait outside.

Forget the small stuff like amputations.
They have prosthetics now for everything
except for tallywhackers.
Who needs more kids anyway.
My wife will send you an email if I die.
Ask your wife to do the same for me.


Comments about A Senior Citizen's First Email by Donal Mahoney

  • Gold Star - 16,120 Points Mandolyn ... (8/9/2014 10:25:00 AM)

    that ending was a surprise!
    i love this poem- especially the first two lines of the last strophe and the entire feel of this write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 9, 2014



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