A Reverei Poem by Xelam Kan™

A Reverei

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A reverei happend last night...

JOHN:
what poetry is or what it should or should not be.

MOUSAI:
Glad to see John, at least someone remembered the heavenly Muses.
Poetry is
a symphony in the solemn temples,
or a painting- of Angilo and Vinci-that's felt.
it is emotions sweetly express in meters.
inspires souls and culture.
and John
it veils in beauty,
begins in delight and ends in wisdom.
john:
But what about the new(contemporary) one,
as many of My DEARS love it, adorn it?
Mousai:
Ah! its nothing but volleys of non sense, a chaos in FORM.
that
sparks annoyance among heavenly muses.
this is no art but
a swings of
slangs
in a tortured and fractured tone.
and defies norms
as deaf to Beethoven's songs.
And their rhymes, Ah
adorn with words, hard to wade.
that defies all
poetic worth and trade:
full of scorns.
John:
but we have some 'great minds'
who creates some fabulous rhymes
Mousai:
Never mention them please...
their ART is abhorrence to the mind,
with flippant rhymes,
And how daringly they fashioned it as a
contemporary NORMS.
And deems themselves as sages.
John:
u mean
' Writing poetry is discovering
the conflict with ourselves'
an echo, a rhythm, make nature to dance as well.
Mousai:
yes, and yours...ah!
nothing but a 'gore' hosting scuzz.
And buzz of bees;
snarky and fusty.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terrance Tracy 29 November 2013

You have expressed in this poem my sentiments made in a message that I sent to you. Terrance Tracy

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Unwritten Soul 24 November 2013

When John talking to Mousai (may be known as Gulsher too hahaha) ..this is clever way to tell the idea of contemporary poem and how some real poets think about it, yes through dialogue manner approach. I guess no one include me here to include themselves as a poet specifically, at least many of us here.. We appreciate the poetry as an art but we dont contaminate it as we classify as you call as contemporary poem..hope it block it from damaging the art expression in real poem. You both are great as one voice but for us who cant write well at least we tried to write and appreciate the poetry not just let it be an abandoned art..it is no appreciation for Da vinci painting if we cover it and exclusive for certain group...there is no inspiration of his painting if it can awake the desire of people to make new art when they look at his work..yes even we not born as fantastic painter..this is same to us that cant write poetry, we appreciate all the grand works, we get inspired to write but we not poets, we just feel inspired and need to write...to avoid from shame the poetry art overall, being classifying as contemporary is fine, even if it consider just an idea to write also fine...We cant do well but love to write cannot expel from us...Dont mind us dears, let encourage people to write...either no one appreciate and die, or giving them chance to learn, love and improve_Soul

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