A Remembrance Poem by M. Asim Nehal

A Remembrance

Rating: 5.0


A tear silently left
the corner of my eye
dragged me to the window
to look at the dark night sky

I felt her love deeper than ever
the breeze brought back
the fragrance of love
desire blossomed like the winter roses

I felt her love melting on my body
and a lump rise in my throat,
I felt the desire to meet her,
I truly understood the meaning
of this desire in her remembrance.

Thursday, November 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 06 November 2015

Thoughts of the dear one are so intense that they move the poet to tears! Tears well up in our eyes when emotions swell in our hearts! A lovely poem!

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Rajnish Manga 05 November 2015

Love gives us strength and makes us sociable. We long for meeting our love so as to have a purpose in life. This desire coupled with remembrance of that love has been deftly portrayed in the poem. Thanks. A lovely quote from the poem: the breeze brought back / the fragrance of love

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Sanjukta Nag 05 November 2015

I felt her love melting on my body and a lump rise in my throat, this is the depiction of such a strong emotion, that has made the lovers weak. Heart touching poem. Loved it.10+++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 November 2015

Tear left silently too conveys many things in expressive emotion. Feeling love makes melt both mind and body. Wise, interesting and nice sharing...10

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