A Quest Poem by Nathan Barkley

A Quest

Rating: 5.0


Inside of me something was growing
Aching and burning yet i was blissfully drowning and yearning
What was this emotion my face and actions was showing?
Just with that simple 'hi'
I felt I was falling so fast into the sky
the beach is where I hide
yet the vast blue sea are too similar to your eyes
Within them were untold stories and priceless gems
I wish I could swim in them
Going deeper and deeper
Forgetting about the pressure
My desire, my curiosity can not be measured
I would swim, even in the darkness
I would light it up with this new found, dare I say... Happiness
Something was drawing my in
Even though I knew that never seen monsters were within
I pressed forward, never looking back
I was ready to attack
I fought and fought to see
that something that entranced me
I felt a warm, soft, glow radiating from a beautiful chest
What is it? No i cant stop and rest
Returning to the surface with it
What is this, i wanted to protect it but with this i wasn't content
I must open it!
Yet I have no key
My soul was looking for an answer
It seemed that only a heavenly response was the solution
Laid there in the sand pondering, I heard a 'hi'
What a beautiful voice
I can not lie
I had no choice
I had to smile
I looked up and there she was
Standing there flawless and to my surprise
she pressed her lips on to mine's
Leaving me breathless and weak
The chest open and I couldn't believe
It was a heart, which belong to her the queen of the sea

(Now i want to go to the beach) by Nathan Barkley

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saane Pahulu 15 October 2009

this is great...you write your poems with so much maturity and power that it draws me in.. once again another great poem. thats funny i feel like swimming :)

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Rosalinda Martinez 13 October 2009

Wow... great! I like this sea queen! Keep writing.

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