A Beautiful Scar Poem by Nathan Barkley

A Beautiful Scar

Rating: 5.0


This night so cold
Can't help myself to come in
I didn't know how good it feels to sin
This lips that are so soft and gentle
Persuades me to keep going
deeper and deeper
My head is blank
at the same time it thinks
Feeling the heat that comes from within you, i'm about to sink
Breathless, hot, excited, and a little scared
We both show whats inside
Our hearts begin to intertwine
Our hearts beat at the same time
Playing a song that makes us want to play this game
I'm being overwhelmed by your touch
Your hands try to grab my back, my neck
What a rush
Instinct takes over
Over and over
Not wanting to stop
Sweat dripping, head spinning
Kisses are everywhere
I taste it
It races up my spine
I'm burning, yearning for more
So curious, for what's in store
Your gasps heal me, it completes this heart
Like a furious water fall it can't stop
Then gradually everything falls and stop's
Like millions of falling stars
Falling, falling, falling
in both our hearts
Leaving a beautiful scar

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gold Fish 14 October 2009

Exploring new waters I see. Like I said, you're a storyteller. :) 10+

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 15 October 2009

Hi, your poem flows passionative images of coming out of the cold into the warmth of love. It deserves nothing shy of a 10+++...very beautiful images of healing passion that smooth all scars Thanks for your comment on my poem 'a victim of love'.If you're new to Ph, welcome and keep writing you're good>>>>>>

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Chinedu Dike 23 December 2019

A passionate bit of verse, well conceived and elegantly brought forth from the heart. Thanks for sharing, Nathan.

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Lolita Hiroshi 06 November 2009

i'm speechless.... so emotion filled: intense WOW wow.

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Quin Faas 18 October 2009

this is an intense rush of emotion.. the best kind.

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Eyan Desir 16 October 2009

haha beautiful pause hmmm sounds sweet that is a good one 10s

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Saane Pahulu 15 October 2009

this is so wow..i'm speechless again! its like a scar that you don't want to forget its meaning... thats like the real scars on me they all have a meaning and a reason to be on my body... and this is kind of a turn on! ! ! :) :) lolz this deserves more then 10+++ for thats how much i loved it! !

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