A Portrait Painted With Words Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

A Portrait Painted With Words

Rating: 5.0


Pray what is it that you try to explain?
Explain? Poetry portraits of words paint,
Feelings are felt; yet, words being so vain,
There's li'le to know but enjoy fragrant scent.
A flower's scarce smelt to know what it meant,
Scent be the path the joy in flower packs,
Problem is: words waft meanings howso faint,
Poet distracts still; turns, twists, and sidetracks.

Lucky, if his ferry fetches some fish,
But that can make no ferries fishing boats,
As melody, mere ornamental notes—
Fishing nor a fish dish be poet's wish.

Still dear, if you enjoy my word portrait,
And call it meaningful still, wow how great!
____________________________________________________
Sonnets | 06.04.2017 |

Wednesday, February 6, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: humour,poetry
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A poet's wife reads one of his pen portraits, as he likes to call them. She belittles one such: what is it you're trying to say? But a poet's ferry does not aim at fetching any fish. Yet, from his heart of heart, he'd love to catch some, and that his readers like his fish-dish.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 October 2019

you are too good in giving sample poetry a lady wrote to me don't give him a fish toeat give him a net to fish she meant that I will not to post a poem for you go fish in the sea like in Victoria Gardens Ottawa compose poetry on every flower every bush but state okay now show frankly don't beat about the bush FRANKLY you are not ever a poet going to be let butterlfies flee you remain just a bee or flea

0 0 Reply
Aniruddha Pathak 23 October 2019

If I've understood the riddle of an enigma of yours, what your right hand gives by way of a compliment, your left hand takes away with a left-handed one. Any way a left-handed compliment is still better than no compliment. So thanks for small mercies.

0 0
Mahtab Bangalee 06 February 2019

excellent wisdom writings- As melody, mere ornamental notes— Fishing nor a fish dish be poet's wish/// love this sonnet

0 0 Reply
Aniruddha Pathak 06 February 2019

Thanks for liking this tongue-in-cheek sonnet, Mahtab Bangalee.

0 0
Bernard F. Asuncion 06 February 2019

A wonderful poem, Aniruddha...10++++

0 0 Reply
Aniruddha Pathak 06 February 2019

Nice to hear your feedback, Bernard, after some time.

0 0
Dr Dillip K Swain 06 February 2019

Sir you have indeed sketched a colorful portrait through fascinating words! Liked the last two lines most......10

0 0 Reply
Aniruddha Pathak 06 February 2019

Thank you Dr Swain you like humour. I think on this Website, we need some.

0 0
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
Close
Error Success