ramesh rai

Gold Star - 18,458 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

A Moment Of Paradise - Poem by ramesh rai

Truly speaking
believe it or not
but it is true

on 16th March,
i had a dream
at about 03.00 a.m.

i was gazing at the sky
i was seeing
two Angels folding their hand
came down from sky
landed on earth and stood
before me.

i was surprised and
thought, it was a shape
or like me, to be confirmed
i touched one angel
with my fore finger

they both smiled and
flew away to the sky
crossing the clouds
they became vanished

i was gazing and thinking
was it a dream or true
thanks God! I realised
a moment of Paradise.


Comments about A Moment Of Paradise by ramesh rai

  • Gold Star - 38,652 Points Akhtar Jawad (9/16/2014 10:14:00 PM)

    Love of humanity gives peace of mind, and peace of mind gives peaceful thoughts, and peaceful thoughts show a glimpse of a moment of paradise in dreams that are almost a reality. A nice write. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Gnossienne (3/23/2014 12:38:00 AM)

    A tantalizing glimpse into the Eternal. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,259 Points Geetha Jayakumar (3/2/2014 1:39:00 PM)

    A beautiful feeling of a Moment in Paradise. It gives a nice feelings after having such a beautiful dreams.
    Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,450 Points Ken E Hall (10/31/2013 5:22:00 AM)

    When you write at times you have heavenly thoughts shall I say a moment in paradise...yes indeed...thanks and regards as always (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,030 Points Queeny Gona (10/14/2013 9:25:00 AM)

    Nice feeling to dream such a pleasant moment! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,101 Points Heather Wilkins (6/1/2013 9:23:00 PM)

    a moment in paradise a beautiful thought. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,667 Points Hazel Durham (9/22/2012 6:34:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem so original full of spirit and wonder! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Anhelica Velasquez (3/23/2012 6:44:00 PM)

    i like it. it tells a story and plus its pretty (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,936 Points Dave Walker (3/23/2012 8:24:00 AM)

    A really beautiful poem, like it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lord's Gift (3/17/2012 7:35:00 AM)

    Wonderful Story! There is angels & Jesus is Lord; There is a God the Lord Jesus Christ. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 17, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, March 17, 2012


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