A Merry Exit Poem by Dog goD 8Hate

A Merry Exit

Rating: 4.8


The Xmas clan,
a shrinking contingent
of Santa's friends,
contended for singular status,
and at giving...
that was last year.
Now, due to apprising
remarks, they're more cautious...
and with such/that
intrusive cause

It was successfully related
how... a merry xmas envolved
a present to oneself
and through a desist
fervor

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gary Witt 14 February 2010

Mr.8Hate: An iconoclastic piece. Commercial vacuity, people trying to out-do each other, and, perhaps, disbelief in (or at least a devaluation of) the underlying story of Christmas. I find this very provocative. Thank you for sharing it. -G

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