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(Kerala Palakkad)

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A man with a black coat!

Walking down the crowded lane
I just had a glimpse of man with black coat and a big hat covering his face.
So mysterious he looked
My curiosity aroused to see him.
But he vanished in no time.
Then I entered a lonely road
To my home.
Full of trees and a garden with silence.
Just enjoying its beauty I went along.
Then again caught a glimpse of same black coat.
But this time horror stuck me.
I felt he was following me.
The started walking fast.
Then started running.
Then I just turned back
He was not visible.
I felt relieved.
About to go, to my horror
He was right in front.
He caught my hand so tight.
I thought I will just faint.
Then slowly he removed his hat.
To my horror I couldn't believed
Leaving me gasped
It was my beloved
And he was expected next week only.
Oh my God!
But it was such a surprise full of
Sweetness, and horror too
How can I ever forget such a wonderful
Surprise.
Life is meaningful when surprises
Come on our way!
Am I right!

Submitted: Friday, August 09, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, August 28, 2013


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  • Tadasha Tripathy (4/15/2014 10:56:00 PM)

    Absolutely right. A beautiful experience mem. Thanks

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/27/2014 11:45:00 PM)

    Life is meaningful when surprises
    Come on our way...nice one...10

    life is stable
    if there is no trouble
    life is hard
    if there is no way forward

  • Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (3/3/2014 10:17:00 AM)

    This is like a suspense movie ending in beautiful notes of love, ecstasy and emotions...............Geetha......
    very nicely composed...............

  • Ed Nigma (2/5/2014 12:18:00 PM)

    This was an entertaining piece. A chase within a chase, fear into surprise and the end result is joy! Nicely done. Allan Gerard~

  • Ramesh Rai (8/13/2013 9:16:00 PM)

    wonderful feelings. and you are right too.

  • Aswath Raman (8/13/2013 2:58:00 AM)

    Ha! As I expected! Who else but your beloved can make you fearful and loved at the same time? These little things, I believe are the pleasure of life..Good write!

  • Bobby Wynn (8/12/2013 1:41:00 PM)

    Loved it. It was a great time.

  • Shahzia Batool (8/12/2013 1:33:00 PM)

    just gripping a verse-story...you have the dramatics Geetha! ! !
    A strong write! ! !

  • Heather Wilkins (8/12/2013 12:21:00 PM)

    a poem full of mystery good to know it was the beloved one. a good write

  • Kavya . (8/12/2013 11:41:00 AM)

    A mystery poem with a beautiful ending..luvd it

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