A Lovely Dream! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

A Lovely Dream!

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I dreamt of a small house built by warmth of love.
A small window where only the freshness of fragrance flows in
As well as to welcome the cute birds and tiny squirrels.

Everyday a single rose will bloom in my lovely garden
Where my beloved will tug a rose in my hair.
Delicious meal with just one single pudding
Though saving will be quite few yet heart will be contented.

Maybe it's just a lovely dream
Many may be blessed with such lovely dream
But they may be dreaming of someone else's dream
As I am too dreaming of others.

That's why wishes never remain fulfilled
They remain mere a lovely dream in our lives!

© 2014 Geetha Jayakumar. All rights Reserved.

Friday, August 8, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 08 August 2014

A home wherein there is love has always been a woman's favorite dream, first he dreams it for himself then for her daughters and grand daughters. A lovely poem.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 08 August 2014

Indeed a lovely dream it is and composed so elegantly.......Geetha......I am so much impressed........thanks for sharing

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Salini Nair 09 August 2014

they may be dreaming of someone else's dream As I am dreaming someone else's! ..........may be true.....................but this is a dream for everyone........nice

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 09 August 2014

A small home full of warmth and love is a dream for everyone. Its fulfillment is a dream come true. Nice poem. Thank you.

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Neela Nath Das 09 August 2014

We nourish a dream of great things.But, when it does not come true, we become upset.This is a lesson for us.To dream of a happy home is a sweet desire indeed.Because, the house may be big but to make it a home is not easy.Geetha, a superb poem you shared with us.Thanks.

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Heather Wilkins 15 August 2014

to dream is human. each of us do it. lovely write nice imagery

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Amitava Sur 12 August 2014

With dreams only the life can move ahead, the dreams are the essential primers of life. The more you dream the more you 'll be encouraged. Hence all those dreams are very welcome Geeths, very nicely detailed.

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Tadasha Tripathy 11 August 2014

Once Dr.APJ abdul kalam told that, Give wings to your dreams and fly high. I remembered the line, But I don't know about real life. I liked to read the poem much, But feel some what change in my thought.

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Valsa George 10 August 2014

Whether realized or not, to have such lovely dreams will definitely brighten up our lives! I enjoyed reading the spontaneous unfolding of your tiny dream where there is a single rose in your garden of love and where birds and squirrels are admitted through the tiny windows!

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Hazel Durham 10 August 2014

Dreams enrich our souls to aspire to what we really want out of this life, but even though they don't come true it's good to have had them! A dream of a humble home so beautifully written with panache!

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