A Love's Confession Poem by Romeo Della Valle

A Love's Confession

Rating: 4.9


I can not give you less than me,
Except for the future, no more,
With a head so heavy now,
When I seem unlike myself
And so unsure of all that
I could not have seen
Beckoning to your open door...

I know there must be words to explain
But I cannot reach them anymore
Close enough to assemble a phrase
Sounding out like I did before.
Those feelings embedded in my poems
Trying to repair our wounds
Through a message that could endure...

I am he, I am he, your lover
For now and eternity
Since before us there are days
To gather each fruit of possibility
And coming closer to each other,
We will the nearer to heaven be
Beholding a beautiful sight
Of Love and Peace for always
Surrounding us with a holy light
And blessed forever after,
Together like we were meant to be.
Don't be afraid at all
And give Love and Peace a chance...


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Crimson Love 03 November 2011

This is a beautiful love poem, the descriptive words you used painted flawless images. Truly magnificent! ! ! :)

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Dan Leo 03 November 2011

Wow, the honesty of a future hearts will, and viewing of a past, surely one of the greatest writings comes not from a deliberate write but ones own experiences.

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Ghost Writer Insomnis 03 November 2011

Indeed my friend: out of the abundance of the heart, poems do speak. We travel through life wanting and needing the deliberate love of another. what we find is an education to develop strength within out character, to carry on. A broken heart reveals our closest secrets unburdened to God, who will then attempt to put us back together. Should we listen hard enough we will encounter the means by which 'TRUE LOVE' has been created individually, for each heart that determines to be whole. True Love will always give one hundred percent of all three involved; God First and then those in love. You stand no chance at all If your creator is not present at the creation of your love with another..... Selah....

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Richard McClellan 03 November 2011

I can tell this poems comes from the heart and has some closeness with you... A very good poem... I like it.

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Bella Hernandez 04 November 2011

amazingly beautiful poem. again you out did yourself just amazed what a confession you just gave ~Bella

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T. R. Crissian 28 November 2011

A beautiful poem... very touching. It reminds me of a winter day sky- gray but every so lovely..... such feeling. You poured feeling into this poem- that is how all poems (and books) should be like......

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Lenore Lee 15 November 2011

Awh, like Lexlie said all females are waiting for someone as sweet and romantic as you to say that to them. Peace and love always! Lenore Lee, from Sydney, Australia

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Kaila George 15 November 2011

Who ever she was...shes lucky...its beautiful and poetic...crys...(tears of joy) girls are allowed to cry at beautiful poetry....sigh...that was brillant...heart felt...and touching, so heart felt.

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(De Va) 14 November 2011

touching to the depths of love......ty for sharing...I did so enjoy reading it...smiles n blessings

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Lexie Bousman 12 November 2011

That is a beautiful poem i am still waiting for a man to say that to me

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