Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 3,772 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

A Lost And Lonely Boy - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

A lost and lonely boy
with nothing but his dreams
born into poverty
and a mother with collapsed vains

He watches her stick needles
between her toes
her eyes roll back
with ecstacy and pain
all he's left with is battered piano keys
on the rooms back wall

He plays those keys
to the rhythm of a rasp
his mother calls breathing
he plays those keys
for the love he should have had

This was is life
from a child to eighteen
no friends no love
just those piano keys

Then by chance
someone knocked on the door
said they'd just heard
someone playing the piano
like they'd never heard before
said they'd sign him right then and there
he never looked back
as he stepped out and closed the door

Sometimes he thinks back
to that lost and lonely boy
and thinks his life is all a dream

But then he hears Eric Clapton shout
we're on in ten minutes
and he knows it's not a dream


Comments about A Lost And Lonely Boy by Dave Alan Walker

  • Veteran Poet - 1,547 Points Loyd C. Taylor, Sr. (5/21/2014 3:08:00 PM)

    Hello poet Dave. One never knows what he or she can become, and we should always be alert to the potential in others. Well done, Loyd (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 313 Points Chris G. Vaillancourt (5/6/2014 8:37:00 AM)

    what a great poem......loved this piece! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,907 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (4/20/2014 9:04:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem which inspires all. Talent is sometimes recognized. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 149 Points Laurie X3 (9/25/2013 4:30:00 PM)

    Reconciling with one's past is a conscious effort that cannot be replaced by any amount of success. The reconciling is the success. I find the world looks quite the same from a dirty alley or a fancy living room when I am at peace with who I am. Without his tragic beginnings I doubt he could have become so dependent on the piano. A great example of making your own choices in spite of your situation. He could of chose to do a ton of less productive things than playing piano. Provo! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Kalpana Shah (9/10/2013 1:40:00 AM)

    heart touching... every word displayed beautifully, got engrossed :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,734 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/3/2013 8:31:00 AM)

    Beautiful Musical poem. Touching poem. Loved reading each lines...

    Thank you Sir, for the Beautiful and valuable comments...Which I will store in my Autograph...
    I will visit next week to PH to read yours poems.
    Thanks a lot. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 434 Points Paola Degli Esposti (8/2/2013 6:13:00 AM)

    a good rhyme. Musical poem. Well balanced story. i like it, congrats (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gleb Zavlanov (7/31/2013 2:22:00 PM)

    This is quite a touching poem. I really enjoyed it. Nice job. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 11 Points Chandini Jaswal (7/21/2013 7:00:00 AM)

    A very inspiring and a touching poem. Thank you uncle Dave and I'm glad that you liked my poem. Please do keeping sending me feedback.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 95 Points Masereka Amos (7/8/2013 11:21:00 PM)

    I'd like a happy ending as well, thanks Dave (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,829 Points Heather Wilkins (7/2/2013 3:51:00 PM)

    great poem. he never looked back as he stepped out and closed the door there is always hope for the future. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,051 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (5/30/2013 3:34:00 AM)

    A sad story with an encouraging end.Nice one. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 347 Points David Wood (5/20/2013 8:07:00 AM)

    Wonderful inspirational poem. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,487 Points Valerie Dohren (5/19/2013 6:58:00 AM)

    Fascinating read Dave, a 'from rags to riches' success story. Good one. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,032 Points Diane Hine (5/19/2013 4:42:00 AM)

    I didn't know that - incredible. Great poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (5/18/2013 10:06:00 AM)

    what a wonderful story..a tell of an ugly duckling turning into a beautiful swan.....brilliant job then again it is from a brilliant poet (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,174 Points Ramesh Rai (5/17/2013 4:13:00 AM)

    indeed cool. i like the poem. regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (5/16/2013 9:03:00 AM)

    Cool story, I like these a lot. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 182 Points Karen Sinclair (5/15/2013 5:30:00 PM)

    never heard the story of eric clapton but this poem outlines a life which is far to sad to be created.... a beautifully penned write and tribute tyvm karen (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 15, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, September 12, 2013


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