a lonley girl wishes for one thing,
and one thing only,
to end her life,
only one person can changer her mind,
her lover,
because a lonley girl wishes for,
someone who can love her without being told,
someone who is warm and not cold,
a lonley girl wishes to be treated like gold,
they want to be loved,
they want to be held,
a lonley girl wishes to be out of danger zones,
they want no more than to die or be loved,
i would know,
i am a lonley girl and these are my wishes.
i can see in the poem a grat massge and the moving fast in the tens
One who is truly lonely is one who deserts God. God loves perfectly, so we are not really lonely, we have many brothers and sisters. well penned.
a clear perspective thought of write...... alicia just not only good a promosing poetes..........
Alicia don't get desperate and act desperate. Please try to understand yourself and then the petals of life shall open to you one by one and you shall be able to appreciate its beauty. I am telling you all this treating you as a very young sister. Anyway I liked the poem for its poetic value and for that I heartily give you 10/10
Alicia don't get desperate and act desperate. Please try to understand yourself and then the petals of life shall open to you one by one and you shall be able to appreciate its beauty. I am telling you all this treating you as a very young sister. Anyway I liked the poem for its poetic value and for that I heartily give you 10/10
yeah, these r always my wishes.really nice, it touched my inside. :)
i love this poem it mad me cry becuz before i met my fiancee this poem described me! i was so lonely and i just wanted to be loved for me! but now i have a fiancee and a little girl who means the world to me so if this poem is about you just no that it cant rain forever things will get better amazing poet!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I like this poem it theme is simaler to many of mine so therefore i can easily relate to it...10