**let Go, Let Go** Poem by Alicia Roseberry

**let Go, Let Go**

Rating: 2.5


the words they say hurt,
life burns,
so hard to keep that razor,
away from my skin,
away from the scars,
the need to create new ones,
it grows by the minute,
so hard to control,
my aunts,
so worried,
of what i might do next,
i keep my will,
i throw the razor out the window,
i tell myself,
let go, let go,
dont do this,
you're not perfect,
you need to,
let go, let go,
of these feellings,
sit quietly and just,
let go, let go.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
rago rago 18 June 2009

where did you go? ......... ph got a good poem and from you expecting a lot..... well penned........

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Lady Grace 18 June 2009

epressions haunts your dreams..don't just surrender without cause..let it go, but stay here..grace

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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 June 2009

Nice and touchy also

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Anthony Williams 18 June 2009

i don't know what it feels like to go through that but you gave me a better understanding of what people who deal with it go through. Great Poem!

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Shekhar Joshi 18 June 2009

good one.........most emo's can look at you for inspiration..........you are excellent and determined........... excellent piece

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Becca Leonard 13 March 2010

Alicia you are so amazing! ! ! I just cut myself and thanks to this knowing that there are other things to do and people have it worse than me and I have no reason to do this! I am here for you 100% of the way! I love this poem it is very real

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 March 2010

the words they say hurt, life burns, so hard to keep that razor , away from my skin, away from the scars, . to faced it bravely in any given situation.. let that things go from the mind....10 read mine... go back.... visiting hell

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 09 August 2009

Beautiful way to avoid the worst of any situation; let go, let go.

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Krystal Vincent 26 July 2009

i love this poem. it really jump out of the page at me cuz ive been there and ive done that. i almost died from cuttin 2 year ago i dont cut anymore because life is precious. u have just got to get threw the hard stuff to ther to the good stuff. i enjoyed this poem. i know that adrenaline rush i was 16 years old 2 years ago. it didnt get better fast but i had to have time to heal. i felt alone because i was in cps where they take almost everything u love away. i think u should really read some of my poems and see my expirences with life. anyways read the poems called: hopes gone, and while i was in cps custody

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the words they say hurt, life burns, ..... u did not specify why it hurts. but if it love failure.... very good compostiion of wrods and good write...10 read mine ': Si(she) may go.... u will like it

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