Shania K. Younce

Rookie - 421 Points (4-18-1996 / I can´t remember.)

'A Living Day' - Poem by Shania K. Younce

A living day.
A living way.
A living life.
A living time.
A living breath.
A living living.
A living leaving.
A living seeing.
A living left.
A living talk.
A living cough.
A living speech.
A living speak.
A living lively.
A living love.

Topic(s) of this poem: lives

Poet's Notes about The Poem

I was trying to use a living many times as possible. But, I stopped short because I felt that it might convey how people live life. In constant fluid motions. Unknowing of all things. Passing each day by. Please comment at will and with honesty.

Comments about 'A Living Day' by Shania K. Younce

  • Gold Star - 5,346 Points Ken E Hall (12/8/2014 2:32:00 AM)

    A living day expressed as we all go by our daily chores with a bonus of love at the end, , , enjoyed...must say as life goes on wisdom follows close on our heels...regards (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Rookie - 330 Points Kemurl Fofanah (9/20/2014 7:13:00 AM)

    a living words.... u seem good at being precise... good work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (4/29/2014 10:16:00 PM)

    a lively poem! ............
    ........cute and short.......... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,689 Points Herbert Guitang (4/20/2014 7:51:00 PM)

    Lively poem,
    Thumbs up
    10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Jameel Ahmed Ansari (4/17/2014 11:26:00 PM)

    and a Lively Poem! Lol nice write (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,100 Points Antonio Liao (4/16/2014 12:33:00 AM)

    i felt then that i am alive, a wish come true...God bless a star and 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,822 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (3/29/2014 3:04:00 AM)

    well tried but you missed now a days people they are living dead (Report) Reply

Read all 7 comments »

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

Poem Submitted: Friday, March 28, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, April 4, 2014

[Hata Bildir]