Summer Huggins


A Little Surprise


Oh my darling!
i have a surprise for you...
a surprise you'll dream about...
everytime you look at it...
you'll smile that chelsea grin...
no...don't even peek...
or your eye will be sliced...
on the count of 3...
your heart will stop beating...
it'll make your sick mind...
sing a tune of grace...
is the wait killing you love? ...
turn the corner and look up...
do you like looking at my bloody body? ...
dangling from the roof...
shhh don't scream baby...
your wish came true...
your love finally dead.

Submitted: Tuesday, February 21, 2012

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  • Veteran Poet - 3,498 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (2/23/2012 12:21:00 AM)

    very sad poem. Summer Huggins. Do you think that our life is so worthless as the stupid love? Could you tell me a case in which after the demise of the lover, the other one gave up their own pleasure? (Report) Reply

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