A Little Black Creature Poem by lady grace

A Little Black Creature

Rating: 4.6


smaller than a crow
comes the sweet cuckoo
aside of being endearing
she is a pretty bird too…

she tweets when she likes
she cries if she wants
she dance without grace
if she is lonely and sick...

she does a good job
like all others do
she’s gonna be fine
as all ladies do..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Martyres 10 October 2009

I like your little black creature - an enigmatic piece Naizz...

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Catrina Heart 10 October 2009

wow........ what a self description my friend............You're gonna be fine darling! ! !

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Eyan Desir 10 October 2009

Very interesting Grace I wish you can tell me who is this little black creature I felt the poem was nice.. you better be good thanks again Good write

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 October 2009

smaller than a crow comes the sweet cuckoo aside of being endearing..melodious queen as cuckoo is...beautiful creature and loved by all....good descrpitionand write too....10

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Noel Horlanda 11 October 2009

Hey, lovely and encouraging, interesting. I love to read it again and again...this is great Lady Grace as if I'm reading a kiddie book.voted 10+

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I love this bird! Beautifully penned. So well done! ; D

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Indira Babbellapati 21 October 2009

little or big, all birds have unique grace

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Indira Babbellapati 21 October 2009

little or big, all birds have unique grace

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Rafique Farooqi 14 October 2009

Help her you diagnosed her suffering.....with medicmnent........tender hearted lady....born to love

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Obinna Eruchie 13 October 2009

Such a sweet little black bird, you have portrayed.

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