(Edited version of my First Limerick)
Yippee! Passion made Santa Singh silly,
he glanced at a nubile young filly
from Longtown in England -
his heart danced in dreamland -
But he didn't say a word to his Lilly.
Harindhar Reddy appreciates your read and suggesting.........
(It's 50th attempt. Ur advice or version is welcome - Thank U)
This poem has your old sound, which is your trademark, but i am so wonder why suddenly you change the way you write, anyway they all good...write more new stuff_Unwritten Soul
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I would like to translate this poem
'Tis a very beautiful Limerick! ! ! ! Really good rhyme words! ! ! Top marksss! ! !
Thank you for the beautiful comment on the poem 🙏🙏