M.D Dinesh Nair

Veteran Poet - 1,738 Points (Thrissur)

A Heaven And Two Hells - Poem by M.D Dinesh Nair

A heaven opens its doors
And two souls enter,
A king and his rod of power;
And somebody sings a song musical.
Two hells open their doors
And ten thousand souls enter,
A man and his dead brethern;
And a cry for the second burning is heard.

The meadows of the green planet go dry
The sheep bleat, the shepherd goes missing
The mothers show their breast-nipples sealed
The infants wail, the fathers wage a battle to be lost.

Once again the heaven opens its door
And the king and the rod wait to enter.
So do the two hells with two doors
A crowd is pushed in once more.
The burning flesh chokes the nostrils
But the sweet song is played on....

A bird flies unto the sky
As the torrents swallow its feeble frame.
The green planet celebrates an existence.


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First submitted: Friday, April 25,2003

Comments about A Heaven And Two Hells by M.D Dinesh Nair

  • Gold Star - 33,343 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (5/22/2014 3:39:00 AM)

    Beautiful creative thinking made into a good poem and narration of hell and heaven is little exaggerated. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,101 Points Heather Wilkins (9/26/2013 12:33:00 PM)

    a good write. I've been told there is one heaven to come, but one hell on earth and the second one will come later. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 16, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 30, 2013


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