A Heart In Delight Poem by Savita Tyagi

A Heart In Delight

Rating: 4.3


The ruffle of wings
Bring eyes to the sky, for many
See the birds flying.

The ruffle of wings
Bring rapture to ones, whose
Heart is touched by the sight.

Monday, December 2, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: happiness,nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This short poem was written some time back inspired by a Senryu of David Whalen on PH. Unfortunately, I do not remember the name of his Senryu.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 02 December 2019

The ruffle of wings bring rapture to ones heart when he is touched by the beautiful sight. Much delighted poem is so hauntingly executed. Thanks for sharing.10

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Mihaela Pirjol 12 December 2019

I like the repetition in this twin-like stanzas and the serenity of images.

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Akhtar Jawad 11 December 2019

A lovely short poem with all the beauty of Savita Tyagi's nice pen.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 December 2019

such an old poem PH says and shows as NEW..However its so W O N D ER F U L

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Bharati Nayak 03 December 2019

The ruffle of wings Bring rapture to ones, whose Heart is touched by the sight. - - - - - -Our heart should be open to enjoy the beauty written in nature.A lovely poem, thanks for sharing.

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Susan Williams 02 December 2019

The ruffle of wings- - - perfect auditory description as well as original! ! ! 10++++++++++

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