The ruffle of wings
Bring eyes to the sky, for many
See the birds flying.
The ruffle of wings
Bring rapture to ones, whose
Heart is touched by the sight.
I like the repetition in this twin-like stanzas and the serenity of images.
A lovely short poem with all the beauty of Savita Tyagi's nice pen.
such an old poem PH says and shows as NEW..However its so W O N D ER F U L
The ruffle of wings Bring rapture to ones, whose Heart is touched by the sight. - - - - - -Our heart should be open to enjoy the beauty written in nature.A lovely poem, thanks for sharing.
The ruffle of wings- - - perfect auditory description as well as original! ! ! 10++++++++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The ruffle of wings bring rapture to ones heart when he is touched by the beautiful sight. Much delighted poem is so hauntingly executed. Thanks for sharing.10