A Handkerchief Surrenders Poem by Lonnie Hicks

A Handkerchief Surrenders

Rating: 2.7


If I can but see
those reaching arms before me,

feel flat against my chest
your welcoming breasts;

for me this would content.

If I could but feel
that dizzying quivering
your touch makes,

that for me would content.

If I can see
my own soul stirrings
in your beckoning eyes,
my contour
fitting your contour
perfectly,

I'd sigh
the perfect sigh.

So close we;
paper thin
the space between;

that all points of contact
blend
smooth skin
against smooth skin.
.
Give me your handkerchief;
wave it
before me;

and here is mine
in sweet
surrender,
buffeted
by that perfect breeze;
my
and your
deep breathing
brings.
mutually;

handkerchiefed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sreelekha Premjit 27 January 2009

Lovely and romantic, reminded me of John Donne's poems.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 03 January 2009

A well refined and lovely poem. The use of word 'Handkerchief ' gives it a bit Eastern touch.

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Reshma Ramesh 02 January 2009

aweeee sweet poem............well penned

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Sublimely sensual.10/10

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