(! !) A Haiku; Prostrate Poem by Alice Cuenca

(! !) A Haiku; Prostrate

Rating: 5.0


hot summer midday
the sun moves over my head ~
a shadow shrinking

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Ying Escalona 14 September 2009

i can't figure what time was it but i cant wait my shadow to elongate because...i am now in the waiting shed (smile)

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Indira Renganathan 08 June 2009

Very spontaneous thought...well said

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Barbara Terry 06 June 2009

A very nice image rich haiku and I think everybody on the planet has been there and felt that hot sun. A 10+++++. Love & hugs, Barbara

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