(! ! ! !) Just A Thought Poem by Alice Cuenca

(! ! ! !) Just A Thought

Rating: 2.9


...last night
I thought we flew
through a storm
and had been swallowed

I watched both of us
spinning in
between dreams.
athrill with unborn joy,
entranced with
unfelt-touch

I compare
your hazy face
with the picture
on my window...

I grapple with
words swindled with
sighs and ardor

should we fly
to the periphery
of this world
and be racked with
self-reproach?

I wanted more.

But a thought
is just a thought.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 19 August 2009

Astonishing thoughts, fine wording! 10+

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Sebastian Soberania 17 August 2009

your new poem is as usual very lovely and crisp. keep writing..

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Sonya Florentino 09 August 2009

and is a dream merely a dream? i hope not....

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Aziz Alkaabi 07 August 2009

That is a beautiful reflection, derived from that massive fountain only good poets can tab. Great poem and thank you for sharing this. Aziz

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