A Gold Treasure Poem by merna ibrahim

A Gold Treasure

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Health is a gift so value it.
Protect it and don't let it drift.
Health is a noble and valuable prize.
Don't waste it - preserve it - be wise.

Appetites of life are a lot.
Without health - enjoy you cannot.
Health is the key to happiness and joy.
The best a human can enjoy.

Money is the silver treasure.
Can be exchanged for something else.
But your health is really gold treasure.
It is really your inner wealth.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Hitesh Sheth 18 February 2010

rite..rite...rite.nothing is more valuable then health among earthly treausres...a good wise write........

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You did a fine job at writing this. well done.

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Allemagne Roßmann 19 February 2010

Statutory advice Health is a gift so value it. Protect it and don't let it drift. Health is wealth yeah agreed--golden treasure.10/10 for the work.

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 19 February 2010

deep thoughts Dear Merna... Health is invaluable... Thank GOD for such a grace... a well penned poem 10+++++ ThanksForSharing WiseSister/

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Omar Ibrahim 19 February 2010

yes you are correct..then why don't you eat fruits and drink milk? ? : D thanks for sharing.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 29 September 2010

‘Appetites of life are a lot.’ ~ Good thought …add life to life not days… thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Merna Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Zeinab Sherif 22 July 2010

u r right health is a gold treasure so as ur unique absolutely interestin talent of writin poems & ur absolutely wonderful rose inside u....ur heart i give u 10+++++ & RAMADAN KAREEM

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so good, so wise, so nice... Bravo Merna, I loved your verses, indeed Health is the Golden Wealth. when the health is in decline the whole universe seems dark. we have to thank ALLAH for the boon of Health. ThanksForSharing Dear Sis.

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So true! Our health needs to be treasured, looked after. Without our health we have nothing. Meaningful poem. Lovely! ; D

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Marieta Maglas 01 March 2010

beautiful plea for health...very inspiring words of wisdom..

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