A Fight With Life Poem by merna ibrahim

A Fight With Life

Rating: 4.7


This is a duet from'Merna ibrahim & Angelica Ayman':

Maybe life will not give you everything.
I know it's prefidious and sometimes give you stings.
You can't get something with an ease,
You have to work hard and don't cease.


You have to toil from light to dark,
So you can hit your mark.
By the will & determination you can fulfill your aim.
And you must know that working and trying is not a shame.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 10 August 2009

This is a duet from'Merna ibrahim & Angelica Ayman': Maybe life will not give u everything. this duet from you and your best friend Angelica ayman will never face failure if you both go side by side and make your joint fight against life.. pray for your both success..and best of luck 10/10

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Yelena M. 13 August 2009

A very successful duet I see here..with an inspiring message and wonderful rhyme.Thanks for sharing,10 of course :) A.

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Kuji Soliman 16 August 2009

Lovely, thanks merna and angelica, this is wonderfull!

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~ Jon London ~ 16 August 2009

You form a great team..both minds at play deliver this brilliantly to us...I hope you both write more together...well done...both 10+10++

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Lady Grace 19 August 2009

go forward..life is beautiful dear..

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Shahina Noufal 11 December 2010

Nice job miss.merna.you egyptian? continue your works.be friends.iam new at PH

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 22 August 2010

In this world to get some thing one has to give ‘more’ things …yeah I endorse your contemplative poem…very practical for life …enjoyed… thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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They say life is what you make of it! . It is what we choose in life that makes the difference. A poem of hope and inspiration; D

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Saadat Tahir 16 June 2010

nice lines great message well done cheers

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Beauty Philosophy 28 January 2010

A well-penned poem with a good message. Your ideas and conceptions of things bear witness to your premature wisdom. Voted.

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