A Force Powerful! Poem by Ramesh T A

A Force Powerful!

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Drenched in rain while walking in the beach
I decided not to take shelter nearby anywhere
Because the rain would not stop so soon then!

I used to be careful about my shoes at rain time;
I have lost many canvas shoes due to rain water!
Otherwise I enjoyed walking in rain seeing sea
And the water running in floods along the road!

Which is most powerful - fire or water? I brood!
Fire and water are counter forces and dangerous,
In which man cannot survive long by anyway!
Water contains fire and most powerful of the two!

But rain cools down body and creates jollity
That makes children and elders enjoy in dance,
A natural urge nobody can refuse to accept!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh T A 18 June 2011

Thank you Hans VR for your resolution. It will be really enjoyable! Enjoy it!

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Hans Vr 18 June 2011

This is a very nice poem praising a walk in the rain. I was thinking of the song, walking in the rain, while reading it. I agree with you, too many times we have so many petty reasons not to do it andnot to allow our children to do it, but once overcome them, there is such a great joy in a plain walk in the rain. Next time it rains, I will take my children for a walk (without shoes) .

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Ramesh T A

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Madurai, Tamil Nadu, India
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