A Flame For The Moth Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

A Flame For The Moth

Rating: 3.5


the dance has started
as the moth draws itself.
flutter around my heat...
move closer to that which you desire
come to me.
pulse in my flame.
bring your passion.
in me, fill your soul need.
caressing your every move
I respond with heat
I watch
every shudder and lick
swaying to you
I am hot enough to melt desire.
my touch will leave wings singed...
but no longer throbbing.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Hot, metaphorical

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Peter Lebuhn 11 February 2006

hi eila I love this one very expressive Poems that are expressing ones true heart feelings are best in my view I have a couple I think you would like Very shakespearan in Nature 'the dance' and 'Pleasures of thy heart' Enjoy them Namaste Peter

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Uriah Hamilton 03 October 2005

It might be a lovely warm feeling before the final burn.

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