Sunday, August 9, 2009

A Fight With Life Comments

Rating: 4.7

This is a duet from'Merna ibrahim & Angelica Ayman':

Maybe life will not give you everything.
I know it's prefidious and sometimes give you stings.
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Shahina Noufal 11 December 2010

Nice job miss.merna.you egyptian? continue your works.be friends.iam new at PH

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 22 August 2010

In this world to get some thing one has to give ‘more’ things …yeah I endorse your contemplative poem…very practical for life …enjoyed… thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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They say life is what you make of it! . It is what we choose in life that makes the difference. A poem of hope and inspiration; D

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Saadat Tahir 16 June 2010

nice lines great message well done cheers

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Beauty Philosophy 28 January 2010

A well-penned poem with a good message. Your ideas and conceptions of things bear witness to your premature wisdom. Voted.

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Ravi Sathasivam 22 November 2009

A good message is given here. Great expression of life. Yes, life is always beautiful. Thanks for sharing that with me Enjoyed 10+

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Doha Ewiess 18 November 2009

very wonderful expression about life....you both are so talanted....nice piece keep it up ;) Doha

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 07 November 2009

a WISE duet and a positive FIGHT! lovely to read. keep fighting your NOBLE VALUES! an inspired poem... 10 +++ GOD bless you both!

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Jazz Annis 10 October 2009

that was really good! ! i enjoyed reading it and u guys gave me an idea..lol thanks! ! great poem! ! u two should write together more ofter! ! =)

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Angelica Ayman 15 September 2009

i'm really so happy to write a poem with some one is really one in a million i will never find some one kind and friendly like her and i'm very proud to do this god bless her, , with love

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Lady Grace 19 August 2009

go forward..life is beautiful dear..

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~ Jon London ~ 16 August 2009

You form a great team..both minds at play deliver this brilliantly to us...I hope you both write more together...well done...both 10+10++

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Kuji Soliman 16 August 2009

Lovely, thanks merna and angelica, this is wonderfull!

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Yelena M. 13 August 2009

A very successful duet I see here..with an inspiring message and wonderful rhyme.Thanks for sharing,10 of course :) A.

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Afzal Shauq 10 August 2009

This is a duet from'Merna ibrahim & Angelica Ayman': Maybe life will not give u everything. this duet from you and your best friend Angelica ayman will never face failure if you both go side by side and make your joint fight against life.. pray for your both success..and best of luck 10/10

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Afzal Shauq 10 August 2009

You have to toil from light to dark, So you can hit your mark. By the will&determination you can fulfill your aim. And you must know that working and trying is not a shame yes the best fight with life for success is the wise thing in life... and what you expressed here in this poem is interesting, logical and reality based sure, , , i agree with your sweet idea and wish if you never accpet defaet from life and always keep going a head being a strong person... sucess in each and every step is wished for you friend..10/10

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 10 August 2009

good fight....................may be if you fight relentlessly life might surrender.......a good write...

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Omar Ibrahim 10 August 2009

a work for two talented poetesses that's why it's wonderful... a ten to merna and a ten to angelica....

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Allemagne Roßmann 09 August 2009

Truly and rightly conveyed message in poetic form.....tenner

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