A Feeling Of Loneliness Poem by kamryn chew

A Feeling Of Loneliness

Rating: 5.0


Little drops fall from the night time sky
Tears that glisten upon the windowpane
Tiny treasures from the heavens that cry
A thousand small voices calling my name
Whispering for me to keep my hopes high
'For you are not alone in this lonely game'
And I hold back the tears and swallow a sigh
With the thought that someone is feeling the same
And so i stare out the window and i try and i try
To have as much hope as the heavens have rain

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
p.a. noushad 09 May 2008

a very beautiful narration of optimism against pessimism.

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Riquetta Elliott 25 February 2008

Don't give up Kamryn you'll find love someday wonderful poem though. Great work.

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rajagopal haran 09 December 2007

love gives hope and works on hope...with elevation to a higher plank becomes bliss...great poem

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John Tiong Chunghoo 09 December 2007

very romantic, quite hopeless and that's love. savour it with heartbreak, or anything. love is great. john

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