A Far Away Curtained For Certain Land. Poem by Michael Gale

A Far Away Curtained For Certain Land.

Rating: 3.5


So far away, far away, far away land...
This be my saddened forlorn mispent dealt hand.
Far reaching my saddened heart...
Shocking paddles are needed for an unselfish caring, fresh new second chanced start.
Pain does toil in my bodily system to commit way too much damage of spoil....
This is my final lifely royal like kingdom.
This final song in my heart keeps singing it's song longly sad and achingly wrong...
T'will'st this remain my final last swan song sung as singing?
Yes dear reader of readings well poor...
No more score so sore this last final score.
Curtain...
For assuredly certain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 15 September 2006

Wistful, poignant and hauntingly sad. You have a way with words. Kind regards, sandra

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Nimal Dunuhinga 02 September 2006

I see your faraway land through your flimsy curtain and it's frgility too. The uncertain sail without a rudder she goes to the infinity? Michael I grabbed your sad poem............thanks.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 24 August 2006

Provockative Write, GOOD SIR...lOOKS LIKE YA' MIGHT GOTS A GREEN MACHINE ON YIR ARSE, MJG...THE VOTE BEFORE ME WAS A 1, & OF COURSE W/ NO COMMENT.cOWARDS FEED OFF THEMSELVES TIL THEY CHOKE & NO ONE IS THERE TO SAVE THEM....NICE WRITE MIKE''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Michael Gale

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Chicago Illinois/Oklahoma City.
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