Valsa George


A Fantasy - Poem by Valsa George

Dozing on a hammock
Strung between two towering pines
With the sky above-
colour washed in turquoise blue
and the waters below
reflecting that heavenly hue,
you came to me
sailing in a dream
like the strains of a symphony
causing endless vibrations
in my solitary heart

you showed up
all too sudden
like a rainbow on my vacant sky
after a cloud burst of cloistered grief
to blaze it with iridescent shades

Your smile
embalmed my bruised spirit
with the coolness of a summer drizzle
falling, like manna
over starved Israelites
in their arduous odyssey
through blistering sands

Your passionate breath,
spewed on my face
bore the scent of opening buds
in the mazy tangle of wild creepers
growing dense in nearby woods.

Your amorous whispers
fell in my ears
*with the sweetness of the melody
from Krishna's flute
with Radha near, love sick
her lips curled in an immaculate smile.

Your soft footsteps
like the jingle of a court dancer
echoed in the silence of my soul
with a hundred evocations

As the jingles
came nearer in synchronizing rhythm
I held out my arms
to clasp you in tight embrace
and reel you in frenzied jig

But you vanished,
vanished,
with the swiftness
of bubbles rising and breaking
in a beer glass,
leaving me to my desolate zone

The sky overhead had changed
into another shade

Still I lay in mid air,
with my eyes sealed tight
to re-live that dream
once again!


Poet's Notes about The Poem

*According to Hindu Scriptures, Radha and Krishna were so devoted to each other that their romance remains a love legend of all times.Radha would fly into a state of ecstasy with the songs flowing through Krishna's flute.

Comments about A Fantasy by Valsa George

  • Freshman - 686 Points Rajesh.c Bose (10/29/2014 2:56:00 AM)

    Poetry comes first.. words follow... ur every inch a poet Valsa. (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 686 Points Rajesh.c Bose (10/29/2014 2:56:00 AM)

    Poetry comes first.. words follow... ur every inch a poet Valsa. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,060 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (7/19/2014 11:55:00 AM)

    Simply profound and overwhelming...........Valsa.........the imagination touching sky and beyond......with beautiful,
    alluring words.................. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,641 Points Savita Tyagi (6/18/2014 8:27:00 AM)

    I was browsing through your poems to find some thing to read and found this gem. Loved every thing about the fantasy. Beautiful write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,641 Points Savita Tyagi (6/18/2014 8:27:00 AM)

    I was browsing through your poems to find some thing to read and found this gem. Loved every thing about the fantasy. Beautiful write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,112 Points Akhtar Jawad (6/2/2014 9:47:00 PM)

    Your amorous whispers
    fell in my ears
    *with the sweetness of the melody
    from Krishna's flute
    with Radha near, love sick
    her lips curled in an immaculate smile.
    Lovely poem, specially the above lines. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gnossienne (4/21/2014 9:48:00 PM)

    Truly you write so very beautifully x (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,034 Points Paul Sebastian (4/14/2014 11:31:00 PM)

    What an illusory encounter! A desolate heart yearning.... Beautiful write! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,027 Points * Sunprincess * (1/29/2014 1:36:00 PM)

    ..........oh my I feel like I was there....it was a blissful moment full of love and ecstasy...the fantasy is so exquisite and so fine...and I enjoyed every word....love it completely dear poetess... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Padmanabhan Ananth (1/6/2014 4:26:00 AM)

    Excellent poem. The poet's note is great too. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,631 Points Amitava Sur (11/21/2013 1:39:00 PM)

    A beautiful poetic expression of love in a fantasy..... just awesome. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,802 Points Heather Wilkins (6/2/2013 8:07:00 AM)

    a beautiful poem about fantasy. great imagery. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Doug Bentley (4/23/2013 1:23:00 AM)

    Breathtaking! Complex. Delicate. precise imaging & cadence. subtle, jarring. masterful weaving. just the first impressions of a drop-in. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,898 Points Patricia Grantham (2/20/2013 1:17:00 PM)

    I really adore this poem, fantasy at it's best. Thanks (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 628 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (2/10/2013 12:50:00 AM)

    A fantastic poem about fantasy- -The romance of Radha and Krishna is well imagined and rendered.! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,625 Points Neela Nath (11/12/2012 10:29:00 PM)

    Radha and Krishna are according to Indian philosophy, Prakiti and Purush, Atma and Paramatma. Radha's love for Krishna is meant to be one with Paramatma. Very nice maam. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (10/19/2012 8:29:00 AM)

    Romantically piece of written.so fascinating

    I know nothin about Radhika and Krishna in the Hinduism.but i searched a little about it.what i learn from it, is that Radha was Krishna's lover or as it is written Atma Tu Radhika Tasya which u know the meaning better than me.
    I believe that we can learn alot from their love and relationship.the impression that a lover could have on his/her mate.Their relationship or the impressions on their eachother's minds.
    In our tradition poetry we have the same poems and the stories about lovers like (Shirin and Farhad) or (Lyla and Majnoon) .
    I learned alot from this poem.\\\\Muchas gracias for sharing
    cheers (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yoonoos Peerbocus (10/17/2012 12:43:00 PM)

    as the title implies the content follows trend (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Www. Poemhunter.com/m-d-dinesh-nair-2 (10/15/2012 7:46:00 PM)

    The very development of thoughts and crafting of the stanzas excel here and this poem is a feather to your cap of poetic exuberance. The profusion of the poetic devices has a great level of aptness over here.
    Even the poets from the lands where English is the first language may learn a lot from your poems of this kind, Madam Valsa... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Heather Wilson (10/14/2012 3:23:00 PM)

    Beautiful, such a wonderful write with lovely imagination. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 8, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 9, 2012


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