A Fantasy Poem by Valsa George

A Fantasy

Rating: 4.9


Dozing on a hammock
Strung between two towering pines
With the sky above-
colour washed in turquoise blue
and the waters below
reflecting that heavenly hue,
you came to me
sailing in a dream
like the strains of a symphony
causing endless vibrations
in my solitary heart

you showed up
all too sudden
like a rainbow on my vacant sky
after a cloud burst of cloistered grief
to blaze it with iridescent shades

Your smile
embalmed my bruised spirit
with the coolness of a summer drizzle
falling, like manna
over starved Israelites
in their arduous odyssey
through blistering sands

Your passionate breath,
spewed on my face
bore the scent of opening buds
in the mazy tangle of wild creepers
growing dense in nearby woods.

Your amorous whispers
fell in my ears
*with the sweetness of the melody
from Krishna's flute
with Radha near, love sick
her lips curled in an immaculate smile.

Your soft footsteps
like the jingle of a court dancer
echoed in the silence of my soul
with a hundred evocations

As the jingles
came nearer in synchronizing rhythm
I held out my arms
to clasp you in tight embrace
and reel you in frenzied jig

But you vanished,
vanished,
with the swiftness
of bubbles rising and breaking
in a beer glass,
leaving me to my desolate zone

The sky overhead had changed
into another shade

Still I lay in mid air,
with my eyes sealed tight
to re-live that dream
once again!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
*According to Hindu Scriptures, Radha and Krishna were so devoted to each other that their romance remains a love legend of all times.Radha would fly into a state of ecstasy with the songs flowing through Krishna's flute.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Sebastian 14 April 2014

What an illusory encounter! A desolate heart yearning.... Beautiful write!

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Patricia Grantham 20 February 2013

I really adore this poem, fantasy at it's best. Thanks

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Doug Bentley 23 April 2013

Breathtaking! Complex. Delicate. precise imaging & cadence. subtle, jarring. masterful weaving. just the first impressions of a drop-in.

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Heather Wilkins 02 June 2013

a beautiful poem about fantasy. great imagery.

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Amitava Sur 21 November 2013

A beautiful poetic expression of love in a fantasy..... just awesome.

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Indira Renganathan 08 January 2019

Wow..! ! what a colourful portrayal of the wonderful love of Radha-Krishna.....beautiful poem that makes me read it again and again...you seem to be a poet by birth Valsa...God bless you- 100

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2017

Your passionate breath spewed and your smile embalmed my bruised spirit, Communication between Radha and Krishna is beautifully narrated in this brilliantly perceived poem. Tender flow of this poem brightens up life's moment entirely.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 November 2016

Sailing in a dream! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rajesh.c Bose 29 October 2014

Poetry comes first.. words follow... ur every inch a poet Valsa.

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Rajesh.c Bose 29 October 2014

Poetry comes first.. words follow... ur every inch a poet Valsa.

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