A Dream Destination Poem by ankita srivastava

A Dream Destination

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I want to be where
i can find peace there

A small cabin of clay made
live in solitude and so glad

Sarrounded by flowers and breezy air
can enjoy sweet humming of bees there

A fresh morning droping from night veil slowly
and noon welcome with sun glory

Silky evening where linnet sing
moony night where my dreams find wing

I close my eyes and find myself in dreamland
where i can see to and fro only wet sand

I hear in my deep heart's core
a river water lapping with sounds by the shore!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deep Mukherjee 04 February 2012

yes; a dream destination where we will find peace, solitude! ! ! ! everyone wants this! !

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Felix John 26 October 2011

The rhyming of the poem is a success.you've captured the essence of a beautiful enviroment.one can feel and yearn for all this beauty.

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Allemagne Roßmann 30 August 2011

well said..a dream destination is always the best destination...

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Anil Kumar Panda 26 August 2011

very nice.sweet flow and nice wordplay.liked it.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 19 July 2010

i hear in my deep heart's core a river water lapping with sounds by the shore! ......... flute by surge reels through whorl yet the shore resounds from core, quite passionate dream, heart when splashes by tune of ecstasy, well penned, thanks for sharing

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