A Deer Loses Its Life Poem by Gajanan Mishra

Gajanan Mishra

Gajanan Mishra

Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India
Gajanan Mishra
Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India

A Deer Loses Its Life

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A deer loses its life
As it absorbed in
The musical sounds by hunter.

A fish loses its life
As it eats the bait
Offered by the fisherman.

An elephant loses its independence
While satisfying its genitals
With a female elephant.

O my dear, the more you try
To satisfy your senses
The more you become morose.

Monday, October 28, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: senses
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
gratifying the sense organs means more harassment
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Piyush Dey 29 July 2014

there is a profound depth in these words, this will make someone really think. i got what you wanted to convey through this wonderful poem. i like your ink. nice write.

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More good is freedom and curtailing freedom for pleasure's sake is sometimes makes the senses in bad situation and the poem is very nice and wonderful in creating the perfect situations of loss of freedom even for an elephant who is mighty and big and also powerful. I doesn't like to go further and I interested it very much.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 December 2013

A fish loses its life As it eats the bait Offered by the fisherman.... nice one...10 one should not fall to greed even it is essential to feed the care must be taken to see why is it provided free?

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Stan Petrovich 07 November 2013

Fascinating, esp. about the elephant. Is that true?

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Gajanan Mishra

Gajanan Mishra

Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India
Gajanan Mishra
Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India
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