the coin falls
dropped in the well
bouncing off walls
deep to hell
a muffled plumpf
is all to tell
That's the mind of the child you've painted their alright, Charles! ! Laughingly, Gina.
Stumbling to find our change in just a short moment, a great write from you again Charles Well done, we continue to read from your book of tallent, Love Duncan
A nice 'dry' humour which, as it should, leaves much to the fertile imagination...I enjoyed this :) Jack. PS. Thanks for the kind reviews.
This is like Silverstein channeling Poe. It should be accompanied by a drawing of a kid looking into a well with flames shooting out of it and burning his hair off. Very well done.
Your delicious style, coupled with your interesting subjects and your irreverent titles make you a force to contend with and a future addiction. Very charming.
Hey, so it was you watching me dropp my coin in the well: -D Ruth..... another good poem.
lol i agree w/ helen...a muffled plump, that has such a weirdly cool sound to it...good use of that term, first time i've heard muffled and plump together..sweet write
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Kids are always placing bets with God. If this spit falls all the way from this bridge ontp that tugboat, I will become a priest!