A Child He's, Let Him Chill Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

A Child He's, Let Him Chill

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When not a leaf moveth sans His will,
Man struggles taming a sprawling hill,
And He smiles a known smile
Rare still in a long mile:
A child not yet grown, I let him chill.
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Tongue-in-cheek | 04.08.15 |

Tuesday, April 30, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: child,humour
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 24 June 2019

Thanks indeed dear poet, along with the feedback on some of my old poems gathering dust otherwise, I get the opportunity to read them. Often I wonder I wrote them. Recently I received a lot of feedback on my old poems and I must thank the poets. Perhaps they did not find the current lot so interesting.

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Indira Renganathan 23 June 2019

Wonderful deeply meaningful..that is how He is and that is how man is..inspiring poem

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 May 2019

Member: Mahtab Bangalee Comment: beautiful limerick; yeah; let the child chill......//// God is indulgent with His children, but it is the case of children taking advantage of it. Thanks for the feedback.

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Mahtab Bangalee 30 April 2019

beautiful limerick; yeah; let the child chill......////

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