A Caveat Poem by Moushumi moushumi

A Caveat

Rating: 5.0


“It will pass”- the
Agonizing moment tilts
The living stage;
Augurs the movement of
Its octopus’s ledge;
Another pass will mount
Onto the past pace;

Unbeknownst till further
Ado-
Revealed at the recess
Of shadow-
Tangled with dissipated pain-
Across the canyon lane-


20/11/08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Moushumi moushumi 25 March 2009

Hi Indira, Thank you for the wonderful feeling i got from your words... Please have a look on 'THIRSTY LOOK' mousumi

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Indira Renganathan 24 March 2009

What a write..wonderful...caveat has a remedy of silent pace...excellent

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Marilyn Lott 03 January 2009

This is a phrase I use often in my mind when in a situation I don't like. 'This too shall pass.' I think it's a very uplifting thought. It will pass and we can move on. Great job, Mousumi! A '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn

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Kesav Easwaran 20 November 2008

a write coming out of deeply hurt feelings...reflecting on a philosophic mental screen...structure and word selection excellent...10

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Joseph Poewhit 20 November 2008

Some deep valleys in life

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