It was a buffet to remember
With a lovely Hawaiian theme
Food so fresh and flavorful
It was truly a food critic's dream
Shrimp so sweet and tasty
Dipping sauce perfectly mixed
The platters were so beautiful
With everything that was fixed
A pig cooked to perfection
We couldn't wait to eat
So much food to put on our plate
Hard to carry it to our seat
The perfect way to celebrate
Harold's 100th birthday
Grabbed our plate and filled it up
It was just like a holiday!
nice! I like the words, The perfect way to celebrate. keep writing! could you read my poems too? thank you.
yeahhhhhhh..........holiday we are.feel like holiday when i read your piece.the attraction is always there marilyn.great job.
Such a lovely simple write Marilyn...Harold's 100th Birthday merited such a super celebratory buffet...
Nicely composed buffet with nice ending. 'It was just like a holiday! ' nice imagery is used, love it. 10++
The last line gives the required punch. I appreciate your simple language. Our poets are yet to know that poetry can also mean such a simple, straight and well framed stanzas.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Ahh, going Hawaiian wow! Bet Harold loved it! Hope you didn't make him carry (his own plate) Marilyn, Kidding! *10*! Best wishes, Friend Thad