Treasure Island

Maria C. Costa

(Portugal)

A Brief, Encouraging Note


It surely was a hard time
For you to have to say 'goodbye'!
Did she really care about your plans,
Your talks, your efforts, your dreams?
Tell us what happened, honey, and why?
Try and overcome it by all means.
Keep your faith, live your days wisely,
Face your plight,
And things will certainly end up
Getting right!

(May 2007)

Submitted: Sunday, June 10, 2007
Edited: Thursday, April 05, 2012

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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (4/16/2009 10:07:00 AM)

    msst inspirational poetry that enlightens the path of journey, ingeniously cuved over eternal stream leading ahead by true redemption of soul, excellent write by imagery (Report) Reply

  • Vinod Kumar (12/15/2008 7:48:00 AM)

    Great Work Ma..Really took this advice in open heart Thanks for Sharing Merry `X`Mas, Good Year (Report) Reply

  • Palas Kumar Ray (10/9/2008 2:54:00 AM)

    And Dear Maria,
    Don't you think you mean to say
    ' Don't loose your hopes(Keep your faith, live your days wisely) ,
    Just bear (face your plight) '........?
    How nice that what I say in my 'Time's the best healer' you say it here!
    Truly, my effort was to write an encouraging note only to transmit the necessary courage during adversity.
    Your placement is so soothing!
    I'm sure this will surely bring some solace to the broken hearts.
    10+ for this nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Melvina Germain (8/23/2007 7:35:00 PM)

    I love the positive view portrayed in this most precious piece. Excellent poem Maria.--Melvina-- (Report) Reply

  • Sandra Fowler (6/11/2007 4:48:00 PM)

    A lovely positive note. Like sunshine after rain. Warmth goes a long, long way.
    Take care.

    Love,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

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