A Bowl Of Rice Poem by Eric Cockrell

A Bowl Of Rice

Rating: 2.6


sad, but true...
for so many
people in this world

redemption is
a bowl of rice,
and a tent that doesnt leak...

what do you believe in?
what do you hope for?
do you believe enough
to make an effort?

a bowl of rice,
and a tent that doesnt leak!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shadow Girl 02 October 2011

A great issue to put out there...poignantly written. Well done. -SG

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Smoky Hoss 12 March 2013

Your words always have a way of looking deep into the soul, and giving one cause to ponder... for that, thank you.

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Smoky Hoss 12 March 2013

Your words always have a way of looking deep into the soul, and giving one cause to ponder... for thank you.

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Captain Cur 31 May 2012

Spritual and physical needs. Hunger and shelter, basic human requirements so many people lack, a simple bowl of rice. Well expressed.

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Kislaya Gopal 15 January 2012

it made me cry.....!

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lover of poetry sweet 15 November 2011

a great meaning for title. excellent keep up.10

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