A Bloody God Poem by Juan Olivarez

A Bloody God

Rating: 4.8


What kind of God asks for blood,
And makes men mindless slaves.
That they bury children, neath the sod,
And then go hide in caves.

What kind of God, feeds on death,
And thrives on misery?
And takes away the very breath,
From those in poverty.

My God Is love, my God is peace,
And doesn't ask for much.
The man on the cross' love doesn't cease,
He's the best man in a clutch.

12/13/10 Alton Texas

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Casey 03 April 2011

Nice job Juan, keep up the good work Jim

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Smoky Hoss 22 December 2010

Deep truth, thanks for sharing your beliefs brother.

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Lynn Glover 15 December 2010

Truer words were never spoken, my friend, and my God would nver instruct me sto do the things that this creeps have done. A very good write. Thanks.

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