A Better Me Poem by Frandy Osias Louis

A Better Me

Rating: 5.0


Im LeArNiNg To LeT ThIngs Go
BeAcAuSe If I DoNt
EvErYtHiNg GeTs MeSt Up
AnD ThAt I DoNt WaNt
I DoNt WaNt AnYmOrE FiGhTs
AnYMoRe ArGuEmEnTs
CuZ OnE LiL ArGuMeNt NoW
JuSs BrInGs EvErYtHiNg BaCk
So I LeT ThInGs Go FoR US
AnD HoPe YoU ReALiZe AnD KnOw
WhAt WiLL MaKe Me UpSeT
Or FeEL A CeRTaIn WaY On YoUr OwN
BeCaUsE I CaN OnLi Be ApArT Of YoUr LiFe
I CoULd NeVeR LiVe it
So SaY HELLO
HeLLo To ThE BeTTeR Me
ThE OnE WhO WiLL AsKs BeFoRe JuMpInG To CoNcLuSionS
The OnE Who WiLL ALoW YoU To ExPLaIn YoUr SeLF
AnD SpEaK
ThE OnE WhO WiLL ALwAyS CoNtInUe To LoVe YoU
BuT NoT As TiGhT So I WoNt LoOsE YoU
In TiMe AgAiN

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shilesha Johnson 01 October 2008

wow that's deep. i think that that's a great way to do things and look at them. she should know what makes you upset without you having to say it. one of the best poems i've read by you. a ten

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Tai Chi Italy 01 October 2008

Excellent expression. Highly romantic and the text format is all you. Thanks for sharing your heart, the truth is out there....smiling at you, Tai

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