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Me, Myself and I

Rookie - 2 Points (12 october 1974)

A Beautiful Day


As the sun opens up and begins to rule the morning,
It sheds its light over our crumpled sheets,
Waking me to yet another day with you,
As these morning’s are the ones that I most treasure,
That crooked smile, and your cold feet, it’s the only thing that you wear,
I stretch, and begin to untwine myself from you,
Your body’s so warm and the soft aroma of desire, still lingers in the early air,
Leaning forward, I kiss your brow as you awaken with me, as we both share a smile,
I shed these sheets and make the coffee, as the kettle lets go its whistle,
Returning to the bedroom, I present you with our brew,
You let loose your smile that ‘lights up my room’ and indeed my very world,
For I now know that deep inside ‘everything’s going to be ok’
Whatever the day will bring,
As whenever I’m with you “it’s truly a beautiful day”

Submitted: Monday, July 01, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, July 24, 2013

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  • Bronze Star - 5,300 Points Geetha Jayakumar (9/8/2013 7:28:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem as the day begin with full of freshness.. I loved reading it.
    I think I am reading your poem for the first time.. Fantastic write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Daniel Steele (8/1/2013 5:28:00 PM)

    Happy Poem, he's a lucky man lool

    when you get the time check out my first submitted poem 'Nothing has to happen'

    Synopsis: In a world where instant gratification is LAW I asked if it is the best option in all instances...especially in regards to finding love? ? ? PS this is the first part in a trilogy (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mohabeer Beeharry (7/30/2013 10:33:00 AM)

    I love sleeping late and have coffee in bed with the wife. Great feeling there. Thanks.

    Please read my poems sometimes and comment.
    Mohabeer Beeharry (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,239 Points Patricia Grantham (7/16/2013 12:32:00 PM)

    You are so right the day is made more beautiful when you are with the one
    you love. A very delightfully written poem. Truly enjoyed. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,206 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (7/5/2013 11:46:00 PM)

    Too many mis-located commas amidst the same one train of thought....ok is slang and the use of it takes away from the formality of the work...okay is what you want...I see you also have an obsession for quote symbols...Totally distracting & grammarically faux-pas...No need to use them to embolden your conveyence. The theme and several segments of your delivery show that your writing has improved. Keep an open mind towards constructive advice, and keep that pen pumping ~FjR~ (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,030 Points Is It Poetry (7/3/2013 5:18:00 PM)

    Days begin with joy long days create.
    Then dusk begins to shed the light night fades.
    And hand in hand both settle down and wait...iip (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ellen Mendez (7/1/2013 8:55:00 PM)

    (For i now know that deep inside 'everything's going to be ok'
    whatever the day will bring)
    - yeah.. truly.. its nice (very inspirational)
    i invite you to read my poems and comment... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,138 Points Gajanan Mishra (7/1/2013 7:58:00 PM)

    whenever I am with You, it is truly beautiful. good write. thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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