(a) 33 (Love/Passion) An Eternal Fluoresce Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
(a) 33 (Love/Passion) An Eternal Fluoresce
Swirling mysteries of my psyche
Come explore it with a tender hand
The essence is hidden in the bark of the tree
The sap is like nectar of the divine land
You have to enter untying your robes
Layer by layer revealing the core
Naked in all your majestic beauty
Our spirits entwining, together we soar
Oceans part, thousands new moons appear
With the energy of our combined kundalinis
Infinite flutes start playing music to the ears
Intoxicated, the beings start spinning
The sun will be eclipsed
With the sheer fire set ablaze
The dark sky will be illumined
The stars will twirl in a daze
Then my love, we will cease to be
Moving away towards infinity
Finally the doors will open for us
Our light shall always fluoresce
Then my love, we will cease to be Moving away towards infinity Finally the doors will open for us Our light shall always fluoresce This is very enjoyable to read, well done again T.O. Love duncan X
Your composition is so honest and touching.... full of emotional bondings! I thought of a Response Poem and posted it.... that ai'nt as good as yours! Truly.
Very invigerated versage, flows like the waters of an inner spring, well done T.O.
Enegized & inveterating work, young lady...Smooth, clarion rhythm & structure prevails here, as always...SoLid craftsmanship, T.O. F.J.R.
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4/28/2024 9:00:08 AM # 1.0.0.1119
My Response TO: An Eternal Fluoresce! I tried to delve into your mind, whodunit; But, my gentle hands cannot swirl like it! Your soul’s clandestine, yet I just disrobe; And, I sap from a tree in the Godly abode! In every stratum; I had myself exposed; Yet, you thought my splendor is imposed! You wish, I rise and entangle our specters; But, I fail to blend my vigor in your stars! I am soundless. Yet on music, I am drunk! Yes, I gyrate! But, flutes drive me to funk. I am the dark smog that obscures the sun; And, the stars just quiver when I do burn! I would not terminate my path to perpetuity; You move ahead. I weakened my luminosity!