9 Missing ~ Poem by M. Asim Nehal
9 Missing ~
I left the candle of love burning,
Where I saw the fire in coke missing.
There were many literates and laureates around,
Yet when I peeped closely, I saw humanity missing.
The beauty was all around in that valley
Though eyes could see and enjoy, insight was missing.
And I cried a lot after separating from you,
When the heart really wanted the peace, the tears were missing.
Though I had many arrows in my quiver,
When I found the target, the bow was missing.
And what was missing leave it there are many yet to be fathomed. Focus on that. A beautiful heartfelt missing poem. Well woven artwork.
1) Having read and counted: 7 Missing, the last two were missing too, but this is amazingly worded and marvelously created, the beauty all around in that valley, though only insight was missing, never mind though insight was missing, .
Title is really good and every couplet gorgeous with high philosophy. Kudos..
VERY NICELY SAID ALL WHEN MISSIG BUT WHEN YOU COME TO ME I SHALL BE MISSING MISSING
There were many literates and laureates around, Yet when I peeped closely, I saw humanity missing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/4/2024 11:58:47 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Nothing is perfect in this world. 👌we find one or the other thing always missing...Fantabulous 5 stars