.5. Shooting Star Poem by David Threadgold

.5. Shooting Star

Rating: 5.0


A shooting star passed overhead
Through heavens at such speed
Collecting peoples wishes
Giving hope to those in need

For all who viewed its travels
Expectations growing wild
A Roll Royce or a bag of sweets
From an adult or a child

How could it not remember?
No one ever wished for war
But every time a star goes by
There seems to be some more

It flashed beyond a big full moon
I thought that would be good
Until I heard the news that night
There had been another flood

So shooting star takes on my wish
To help all those in trouble
And should you need reminding
Get back here at the double



© 2008 David Threadgold
Rambling Riddles & Rhymes

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Eaglesfield 07 October 2008

I like this hopeful starry poem.Thank you.

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Marilyn Lott 25 September 2008

I enjoyed this very much, David. You carried my interested along with your shooting star. A '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn

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