4 Seasonal Haiku Poem by jan oskar hansen

4 Seasonal Haiku

Rating: 4.3


Haiku

Snows only purpose?
To make my garden look good
Four months a year


Haiku

Shadows and light
In an unseemly embrace
Foolish April Dance


Haiku

In the middy heat
Mules seeks shady carob trees
Man seeks the beach.

Haiku

Morning sadness
Rain trickles down the window
Grey October sky.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ian Williams 08 May 2008

Just because you make a word plural doesnt mean it has two syllables... faget.

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La La 08 November 2014

Beautiful descriptions, well thought out, a great haiku.

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* Sunprincess * 09 July 2014

.......~ rain trickles down the window ~ is very good imagery.....enjoyed every stanza....

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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 September 2008

Enjoyed the hikus of seasons. Nice composition.

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Very lovely.Good points about seasons

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Ben Gieske 24 June 2008

I enjoyed these 4 haiku with their strong images.

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